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I’ll admit it, I’m no poet
I don’t easily grasp
The elements of a good poem
And that clearly shows
In nearly every piece I write

Rhyme’s don’t come easy
Words alone are hard enough
All I have are feelings
Feelings for you
Feelings that demand you know them

The only thing I can think
To describe my writer’s dilemma
Is that there are no words
To describe how I feel about you
Nothing ever seems right

I could compare your smile
To the glowing of a beautiful moon
Your laugh, to the singing of angels
How incredible you are, to the northern lights
But you outshine all those things

You are the world to me
Even saying that seems inadequate
Mere words, mere clichés
Don’t even break through the barrier
Of all you really are to me
©2008-2009 ~Aelfric-Maundrell
:iconaelfric-maundrell:

Author's Comments

Couldn't get this out of my head...
not too much i can say about this, i think the message is pretty clear, lol.
like always, i think this is teh sux0rz, lol

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You're the meaning in my life
You're the inspiration
You bring feeling to my life
You're the inspiration
I want to have you near me
I want to have you hear me say it
No one needs you more than i need you

~~~You're the Inspiration --- Chicago~~~

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